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technique that Bob Friel uses in his essay that I would like to use is his way
of going back and forth and tying everything together. How he starts off with
action and then develops much of the essay to explain why this action was taken
by him. Then including the chats of family and friends and even what the police
think of Colt. I like all the information that he was able to get from the kids
mother. Digging into his past that really helped define who Colt was and give
the reader a better idea of why he was doing what he was doing. I also enjoyed
his use of capitalization as if every time he used it he was introducing a new
aspect into Colts life and what it meant to why he was there now. Also how he
goes into detail of how people are supporting Colt even though the cops are not
supporting him and what he means to this community. I also really enjoyed the
way he structured this essay giving you the main points and not really beating
around the bush with a bunch of details that had no point of being in there. He
wanted to keep you informed and entertained. I also enjoyed his description of
the little town that Colt came from because it really gives the reader an idea
of how small and expensive the town is and how everyone knows everyone. These are
some things I liked that he used and that I would like to use in my essay.
I agree with your statement regarding Bob Friel's usage of aspects from Colt's past as a way to give us as readers a better perspective as to why Colt does the things he does along with the possible motivation behind it. It's a technique I think I'll include in my own writing as well as the direct quotes from Colt's mother and the others who have encountered Colt.
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